oral draft outline

Oral presentation:

• The story depicts Guy’s frustration and anger, inferiority complex, jealousy, sexual frustration, and deteriorating relationship with his wife alongside a main plot involving his failing status as a man and how his son continues to succeed education-wise
• Dramatically, the story had scenes where Guy would internally reflect on his relationship with his wife in an objectively sexual manner, which i thought should be expanded on more, as it briefly mentions how he could “easier imagine his son’s mouth on her nipple instead of his own”. I wanted to explore this more, which had a side effect of a more original script
• Between page-stage, the hardest part about it was trying to get into character, as well as making it seem less monotonous or “same old story” every scene.